DISCLAIMER ( and an informal FOREWORD as well)
This story and its characters does not have any resemblance to people in real life. It is
advised not to proceed with the story if you dont prefer reading vulgar
or stories with a primal theme, if you know what I mean! Because its
going to get raw and primal soon. The title of the story literally explains the present sitaution we mortals are facing and this story is intended to convey a different message altogether. Hope my first attempt at a proper story clicks well with my readers.
Aravind R Sankar
KARMA IS A BITCH
The night was illuminated with skyscrapers and
lights. The traffic was heavy as horns blared throughout the Anderson and Dickens Avenues The streets were bustling with people, all joyous to celebrate the approaching
New Year with their loved ones. Some carried gifts, the others the hands of
their beloved. In one such street of Manhattan, a small celebration of sorts
was taking place inside Anstruthers, the local pub.....
“CHEERS!”,
they shouted.
The thudding of the six beer mugs were drowned in the hoarse drunken toasts of Jeff’s best friends.
“To
the man who walks down the aisle in a week”, raved Harry, lifting his glass as
high as he could.
“Yeaahhh
buddy. To you, Jeff”, Pollock cheered.
“To
you, Jeff”, they all followed.
Jeff
flushed with happiness and embarrassment. He was the youngest in the group to
get married. Leanne was a woman of great charm and breathtaking beauty. Their
parents knew each other from childhood days. So, he was, in a way, prepared for
such an arrangement. He was lucky he was marrying her.
“Thank
you. You know I’ll miss hanging out with you guys here.” said Jeff.
“Naaah,
you will have Leanne dude. You will be a family man soon.” Neal argued back.
Neal was chosen among them to be the best man at his wedding.
Harry
did an impression that looked like a man peaking during his intercourse. He
concluded the act by falling off exhausted. Everybody laughed. Jeff also joined
in weakly. The barman had a quiet smile on his face. Anstruthers was never this
lively before, he thought.
Amidst
all the pats and punches between drinks, Jeff noticed a woman, silently sipping
what looked like malt in the remote corner of the pub. All the while, she had
her eyes on Jeff. Eyes that longed to have him.
Jeff
too felt it.
This
woman is affecting me, he thought. Not that she was pretty, but there was some
damaged intensity about her which caused him uneasiness but a new found
excitement all the same. His friends drank for some more time, while their eyes
were locked onto each other.
They
soon left one by one. Harry was too drunk to stand on his own.
“You
coming?” asked Neal, Harry’s arm around his shoulder.
“I
think I’ll stay back for a bit more. I’ll call ya soon.” replied Jeff.
“Let
the young man enjoy his last stint as a bachelor”, drawled Harry. “Leave the
poor groom alone Neal. He can handle himself.”
Neal
winked at him and left the bar, leaving Jeff all alone. He was too nervous to
muster courage and speak to her. The woman must’ve sensed his doubts as she got
up got up to join him. She seated herself next to him on the counter.
“You
are too young to hang out late at a pub.”, asked Jeff curious.
There
was no movement. She did not even acknowledge his question. In fact, it took
quite a while for her to reply.
“But
I am not too old for your company.”
She
turned his head to look at him and removed her hat. Her hair was tucked in a
bun. She was attractive, with eyes pale blue that matched her fair white skin.
What
do they call it? Déjà Vu? Blurred scenes from his past life flashed through
Jeff’s eyes. He felt a strong connection towards her. A connection that now
made him feel the twangs of pain of being separated from her. He wanted her, in
flesh and blood. The carnal feeling grew gigantically and was about to explode.
“It’s
okay. You will be fine.”
Jeff
was sharply brought back to earth. Her hand was now on his arm, fingers dainty
and painted red.
He
had to go away, lest he took her right in the middle of the bar. Why was she
irresistible?
Struggling
against his own self, Jeff took out a piece of paper and scribbled something on
it.
“There,
that’s my address. We’ll meet again sometime.” he said.
She
took it without a word, her eyes cold and inexpressive now.
Was
that a smile on her lips or am I imagining? Jeff wondered. He had to get out of
there. His manhood was slowly responding to the unknown charms of the girl.
Jeff
grabbed his coat and prepared to leave.
“Oh
I.... I forgot your name” he enquired.
“Call
me K. Just K.”
He
ran all the way to his apartment at Jefferson Ridge, not daring to look back. She knew him before.
He had also seen her. But where? He panted and stopped in front of the door. He
felt giddy and sick.
Opening
the door, Jeff rushed to the sink and started throwing up.
Jeff
lay down in his sofa. He sat up all night musing over the strange turn of
events. Kay. Queer name. Why couldn’t he face her without thinking about having
her? Kay. Maybe it was just a dream. An illusion. Yes. Probably the drinks. He
had too much of them, he thought.
His
mind grew foggy and tired. Soon he drifted off to sleep, muttering, “Kay.... was
just a dream...Kay...”
He
was wrong.
To be continued.
Wow ... what a beginning .... what about the next part?
ReplyDeleteNext part perhaps in december.
DeleteThanks mate, for your time :)
Well penned down dude. .!!
ReplyDeletekept me glued on to reading. . !!
Waiting for the next part of it. . !!
Very intriguing..
ReplyDeletenext part?.:)
ReplyDeleteNice start! Don't make us wait too long :)!
ReplyDeleteSince many are askin, I guess Il have to release it in November!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your tweet pointing me to this. The story is very well written, quite intriguing. But breaking it in parts will quite spoil the thrill of suspense, I'm afraid.
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